You don’t need an outline to write a flash fiction story.
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For years I religiously made an outline before beginning a short story. It made sense to do this because I wrote short stories that were 2,000 to 4,000 words long.
I made character sketches. I made notes on what the weather would be like in the story. I figured out what parts of the story would be exposition and what parts would be scenes. I wrote down snatches of dialogue.
I would leave my notebook open on my writing desk for days because writing a regular length story was a major undertaking and I would constantly, off and on, jot down things about the story in my notebook. There were many details to get right before I actually started writing the story.
Then came the writing of the story which was still a journey of discovery because inevitably the story would change as I wrote it. Finally, I’d get to the end of the story and guess what? That was just the first draft.
Two, three or four drafts would follow and then afterward came the repeated proofreading for spelling and grammatical errors and editing for diction and syntax (word choice and word order) and the eliminating of all unnecessary words. Writing a regular length story was a major process.
The good news for the writer of flash fiction is that a 100-to-1,000-word story is less about a “storyline” and more about “capturing” a moment in time. It’s like writing a short poem.
Once the flash fiction writer figures out the significant event to be captured in words, the planning stage is over. The only thing left to do is putting the right word in the right order which is better known as repeated revision, a process of trial and error.
You don’t need an outline for that.
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May 15th, 2009 at 8:08 am
You mean a process of TRIAL and error. I find it difficult to write a flash fiction – within the word limits, you have to have a drama, a twist, something holding the reader’s attention.
May 15th, 2009 at 9:16 am
Hi, Uma. Yes, it should be TRIAL. I’ve put in a fix for it. No matter how much a writer proofreads mistakes still slip through. I’m still trying to fix Girls Kissing Girls…
Flash fiction is a significant event with closure. Once you figure out what your significant event is going to be the drama is the significant event itself. Say you write about a couple breaking up. The drama is already built in. This will hold the reader’s attention because one character will want the breakup and the other one won’t. If both characters want the breakup then of course you don’t have any conflict. You don’t have any drama. The difficult part is coming up with a twist at the end that makes sense within the context of the story.
May 21st, 2009 at 9:34 am
Nice article. The term flash fiction is new to me. Thanks for the information.