Toefl Writings Practise Two

Home town is the place where the people are born and lived. By knowing hometown we can say the mother tongue of that person. Generally hometowns are the place where the family is from. My hometown is Hyderabad. All people in my area are friendly, sociable and honest. We can exchange a lot of fun experiences each other.

If I could change one important thing about my hometown that will be traffic system of my city. Most of the individuals in my hometown will suffer a lot from this problem. Now-a-days traffic jams are became severe problems to the citizens. They have to wait for a long time to cross signals in busy paces. I will change the traffic controlling system, so that these people will be benefitted. I can allot the many persons in the place where traffic get jammed frequently. I will use the patrolling system to evacuate the jammed places effectively and quickly. I will keep a check on regular toddlers and make them to walk only on footpaths, this avoids the traffic jams. Certain limitations on the rally are implemented to avoid unnecessary disturbance for the public transportation.

If this problem is not considered as a serious problem then there are many situations in which the people get suffered. And Traffic jams are also one of the reason for headache, stress etc..People cannot reach the destination at the expected time due to the same. In turn they lost valuable time. Moreover the traffic jams will consume more amount of the fuel. By avoiding this traffic jams we can save lot of fuel and energy .Traffic jams are the reason for the pollution of air and sound.

All in all, I will change the traffic controlling system if get a chance to do. By doing this most of the citizens of my hometown will get benefitted in various ways.

How did I write this Essay??

Steps are AS follows

1) Divide the essay into 3 parts Introduction, Body, and Conclusion

2) Introduction: This includes what is asked in the Question, Describing about the main point in the question

3) Body: Generally this contains the supporting points of the main idea. I divided this into 2 parts

1st pro terms about the main idea

2nd con terms about the main idea

4) Conclusion: Paraphrase the introduction That’s  it your done.