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The Road Walked Down Through The Years

The writer is known by their writings as they walk the road of life through the years.

This now, is who I truly am

as my pen takes liberty. 

What now I write is where I’ve been,

so much there for all to see.

Good and bad, and in between,

the road walked down through the years,

a panoramic display of scenes

from sunshine highs to darkened tears.

But I am not so unlike you,

you who would glance across this write.

The road you’ve walked that I’ve never knew;

are similar roads not brought to light ?

Know me by the writes you read

and I’ll do the same for you.

Writing is our consuming need

as to ourselves we must stay true.

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5 Responses to “The Road Walked Down Through The Years”
  • LOVELYHONEY
    March 16th, 2010 at 10:14 am

    Lovely write

    I have seen the world,

    Walking,

    Air crafting
    And
    Motoring

    I have yet to fly to the moon,

    Only if some day

    I have the opportunity

    Ere I go away

    A bit too soon,

    I will also write

    About the moon

    Your writings are graceful
    I hope a friend
    I’ll make of out of you
    Very soon

    lhlhlh

  • Stickinthemud
    March 16th, 2010 at 11:25 am

    Better than “to thine own self be true” is “Nosce te ipsum” or “know yourself”.

    I like your style. It’s direct but has hints of drama about the edges. At least you colour your theme with your own experience, which is something that most people who call themselves poets forget to do.

    At my core, however, I am moved in another direction, for I believe in equity and in equality between peers and frown on the thought or action that holds more to a person’s nature than to a noble spirit of humanity. Why be truer to natural tendencies than to an honour, a principle, or a virtue? After all, a natural tendency is to lean more toward pride than humility.

    Anywho, that’s enough of me rambling. Sorry about that. Thanks for sharing and have a good one.

  • Wordcrafter
    March 16th, 2010 at 12:01 pm

    Thanks so much for the comments as they are very insightful and appreciated.

  • Hepsi.M
    March 17th, 2010 at 12:36 pm

    Awesome write and great pic too,very inspiring thoughts.Keep going and continue to write.

  • Elina Marshall
    July 28th, 2010 at 10:38 am

    Another wonderful poem by you! Thank you for sharing. The picture is the reflection of what you are writing about … or… vice versa…. Anyway, I enjoyed it very much and please keep writing :)

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