Surrender
The pain of an author.
I hold no more a hope to write, I feel my words burning inside of me, as if to scold my innards As if to destroy the love and pain I feel, no more will I put pen to paper no more shall I tap the keys, I am empty of expression and fortitude. I will burn my works so that others can rise in the ashes of my inner being, like a phoenix I will fly to be reborn in a different guise. Why do I suffer so, Why can you not feel the pain I am sensing, Can you see my very soul? See, I hold it in my hand, will it fly with me? Reborn along with my memories, I am committed to surrender Sometimes the memories are worth the pain of letting go; sometimes the pain is less than the hurt inside. But wait… do I see the sun, has the night ended? There IS another day I will go forth and seek hope.
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October 23rd, 2009 at 11:17 am
Powerful….wonderful piece…want to see more:)
October 23rd, 2009 at 11:26 am
You have the fire in heart …..great piece …:))
October 23rd, 2009 at 11:36 am
Some people say to me- they “want to be ” a writer ; you ARE a writer ; Big difference–
October 23rd, 2009 at 11:47 am
wow powerful words…i like very much
October 23rd, 2009 at 11:55 am
I loved it Johnny, a beautiful piece written from the heart
October 23rd, 2009 at 12:17 pm
A lovely write!
October 23rd, 2009 at 12:49 pm
Lovely piece of writing Johnny
Luv your stumble bud Annie52 xxx
October 23rd, 2009 at 1:13 pm
Spoken from the heart Johnny ,its strong and powerful .
Beautyful piece of writing ,
October 23rd, 2009 at 1:40 pm
Gosh! That was quite heart rending. I am so glad the morning brought a change of mind. Powerful work.
Christine
October 23rd, 2009 at 1:56 pm
Wow that was written with such passion, very intense. Thank you.
October 23rd, 2009 at 2:33 pm
Share your light. You created a hunger, dear Johnny. Love your soul.
October 23rd, 2009 at 2:33 pm
Man this letter is insane, I can write a book about it but it’s not necessary
October 23rd, 2009 at 3:53 pm
New hope comes at dawn.
October 23rd, 2009 at 5:31 pm
Johnny, to surrender would be depriving the rest of us whom do not hold such a gift of words to pen. Lovely done an sadly thought to think you’d surrender. I’m blessed to know such a wonderful person with such a gift of words most can only think of let alone put down for others to read. Keep up your talented gift you hold an know to use bringing others into your world of thoughts through words. Greatly done. as always.
October 23rd, 2009 at 6:40 pm
Another great poem, as you know i love you\’re writing!
wish I could start again but words just will not flow.
keep up the great writing. xx
October 23rd, 2009 at 10:17 pm
Yet, another beautiful masterpiece by a good friend of mine!
October 24th, 2009 at 10:44 am
really awesome………..
October 24th, 2009 at 5:31 pm
Awesome piece of writing. Thanks for sharing your talent Johnny xx
October 26th, 2009 at 3:36 pm
An amzing piece here Johnny!
November 1st, 2009 at 4:03 pm
you clever Johnny with your pen.
from the one and only ,you know who.xxxx
November 8th, 2009 at 1:34 am
As always, after the night has passed and the stars are far beyond the horizon; there is a new dawn and you my dear friend, have found it!
A new dawn; a blank piece of paper dying to be touched by the pen you hold gingerly in your hand.
I applaud your courage to carry on and find the words that that convey the feelings your memories leave upon your soul.
I look forward to reading more!
xoxox
♫Cat♫