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Fiction Writers Need to Know Their Weapons

You don’t have to be an expert, but you should know the differences between a revolver and a pistol, a shotgun and a rifle and a long sword and a short sword. As well as a few other details!

Weapons seem to show up a lot in fiction. Of course weapons are common in westerns, crime fiction and often in fantasy and science fiction, but even if you’re writing romance, there’s often a sword or a knife or a gun that shows up somewhere along the lines.

When you are writing about a weapon, you need to know what you’re talking about. I’m not suggesting you have to go out and buy the weapon and practice with it for weeks and weeks (though that’s not a bad idea), but you should at least have some general knowledge of the weapon. And if you can have some practical experience, all the better.

See, if you don’t know what you’re writing when it comes to weapons, there will be plenty of readers who do. And when you make a mistake, those readers won’t be afraid to point it out in e-mails to you or worse, in reviews.

Of course you can keep your descriptions and uses of weapons in your fiction to a minimum. That helps if you don’t know what you’re doing. Sure, you can call a sword a sword and a handgun a handgun. Or a rifle a rifle or a shotgun a shotgun. But even then, do you know the differences between a rifle and a shotgun? Many people do, but not everyone. You need to. For example, a shooter is not going to be able to hit a target 500 yards away with a shotgun. Why not? You need to find that out.

Do you know the differences between a revolver and a pistol? If the answer is “no,” then you probably shouldn’t be writing with a pistol or revolver involved. Why? Pistols and revolvers work mechanically in quite different ways, though I’m not going to get all technical in the limited space here; at the least you need to do a little investigating online. But I’d suggest you need to do more than that. If you’re the type of person who doesn’t want to be around firearms, maybe you are even afraid of the things, you could talk to a law enforcement officer or maybe go to a gun club or gun shop and talk to some folks there. Don’t worry. Gun people always like to talk guns.

There are also issues of history to be considered. When is your story taking place? And where? Semi-automatic pistols weren’t around in the Old West, at least not until the very end when the West was becoming quite tame, and even then the pistols often didn’t work as well as the ones of even a few years later.

Or maybe you’re writing a fantasy story, and you’re thinking none of this matters because your world is filled with magic. Well, let’s say your hero or heroine wields a sword. Do they do so one-handed or two? Oh, you don’t think it makes a difference? Really? Have you ever tried to lift an eight-pound sword with one hand? And don’t think that just because it’s eight pounds (about the weight of a light bowling ball) that it won’t be heavy. All that weight isn’t packed into a small space (like the bowling ball), but is spread out over this really long hunk of metal that can be quite sharp. And then there’s the question of how does your character carry around that big sword all day. On his or her back? At the hip? Believe me, it gets tiring carrying around a sword all day, especially if you’re not in shape. And I’m not even going to go into wearing armor. Also, don’t fool yourself that a smaller sword will be easier to deal with; different swords have different strengths and weaknesses, and often different uses depending upon the age of the society where the sword exists. For example, different types of swords were used and were needed in ages where heavy armor was more the norm on battlefields than in cities of later ages where gentlemen carried a blade but there was no armor.

I’ll repeat, you don’t have to be an expert. All that research would take away from your writing time. But you don’t want to look a fool to your readers. If your stories included weapons, know what those weapons can do and how they work and how they were used. Your readers will know. And so should you.

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7 Responses to “Fiction Writers Need to Know Their Weapons”
  • writing4angels
    June 16th, 2009 at 4:48 pm

    very good tips for fiction writers.

  • Danielle Yockman
    June 16th, 2009 at 5:23 pm

    Thank you! I hate reading stories that place a weapon in the wrong period, or worse show no knowledge of how it is used. If you don’t know better stay away from a fight scene! The history channel offers some great shows that talk about weapons and their use from swords and armor to modern day weapons.

  • Mike Crowl
    June 16th, 2009 at 9:53 pm

    If there was a way of dealing with bloopers in fiction as there is in movies (on imdb.com) then I think most authors would come under fire (no pun intended…well not much of one!).

  • jharmon
    June 16th, 2009 at 11:10 pm

    Mike, seems I’ve run across a site somewhere that had bloopers from books. Hmmm. I’ll have to do some investigating.

  • DebbyBruck
    June 21st, 2009 at 10:58 am

    Good advice. Know your subject before you write.

  • hfinn
    February 21st, 2010 at 8:27 pm

    If you\’re going to write a column about being accurate when writing about firearms, it\’s probably wise to be accurate about firearms in the column. There is no difference between a \”pistol\” and a \”revolver\” per se. \”Pistol\” is the croup that encompasses ALL handguns, including revolvers. What I assume you were trying to differentiate was \”revolvers\” and \”semi-automatic pistols\”. You can\’t just say \”pistols\”, you have to say \”semi-automatic\”, because that\’s what makes that class of pistols different from revolvers, single-shot, etc.

  • jharmon
    February 22nd, 2010 at 3:29 am

    hfinn, it depends on where you live. In the U.S., for example, pistols and revolvers are both handguns, but a revolver is NOT a pistol. A revolver is a revolver because it has a cylinder wheel that revolves. Nearly all other handguns, from semi-autos to flintlocks, are considered pistols because pistols are defined as handguns where the chamber is integral to the barrel. When writing for a U.S. audience, the term pistol is generally used to refer to a semi-auto, as flintlocks are usually noted as flintlock pistols or flintlock rifles (or other) and a full-auto pistol would be labeled as such. Other oddities will also generally be labeled individually. This is the case for nearly all U.S. firearms journalism and non-fiction literature (not including mass journalism because they mostly don\’t know much about firearms).

    Some other countries view this differently, and yes, in those countries the terms handgun and pistol can be used interchangebly. I don\’t live in those countries and am not familiar with all the different nomenclature for each individual nation and/or culture.

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