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30day: A Post That No One Expected You to Write

Day 14 of the challenge.

I could easily write a poem, simple and to the point of my feelings. Or a short epilogue of my life, the life no one expected me to be living (but that “epilogue” is actually the next upcoming short story called Loveless Lullaby.)

A short intro – Battle of Defeat

“Given fire to fight with ice; is nothing I’d do in vain

Initially the oblivious would succeed and the world would gain

But each battle has defeat; and the vain will soon believe

That we couldn’t fight alone – even with the strongest armour

You’re the ice sculpture I’ve been longing to melt

But don’t blame me for insanity because you’re the person who ignites my fire.”    ҉

FANTASY FIGHT:: ACT ONE

E. Sullivan —- Eldest daughter of Sir Stephan Sullivan, rebel yell teenager.

C. Sullivan —- Youngest Sullivan, pretty in pink, hates fights.

Erik Dwayne — C’s love interest, a commoner.

Robby “Marley” —- Erik’s sidekick, a love interest in E Sullivan.

 

[[set in the woods, outside capside]]

E: “I’ll slit my wrists and cut your hair, feed you my blood and make you swear!”

C: “Stop it, violence will not solve this. Erik is beyond battle.”

E: “Sister, he is the battle I can and will defeat.”

C: “Ugh, what would papa say to your act of fight. Erik is just a silly commoner.”

E: “A silly commoner. Erik. You love him!”

[[enter Erik and Robby]]

Erik: “Oh, feast your eyes on this my dear Marley. Two loyal royals. The daughters of Sir President Sullivan.”

[[Robby/Marley pre-occupied, looking at E dancing.]]

Erik: “Robert! Robby, Marley?!”

Marley: “Thou, fine day, dearest Sullivan’s?”

E: “What?”

C: “He is talking Shakespeare. Indeed, Sir Marley! I shall be engaging in thus sun, ride with me this afternoon?”

Marley: “Does my lady have a name?”

C: “She is called, C. Sullivan.”

 

 

 

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