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The Bi-ku

Another experimental style from the mind of the word dancer,babbling BoJack.

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This type of poetry is the most difficult yet from the BoJack School of Literary Works And Vocabulary Review.

The new form is called the Bi-ku. As indicated in the title, it has two syllables with two lines only. Sorry folks, due to the economy even the captain of the BoJack Express has been pinched. I must now require a small admission fee. But fear not, it costs no money, just creativity. All boarders now will be required to give me the Bi-ku style of poetry before the next trip. Let’s take a look at the structure of the new form, and give it a try.

I love

Just you

See, short and sweet, let’s try another one:

The stars

Above

Again:

The clock

Strikes one

Isn’t this fun?

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4 Responses to “The Bi-ku”
  • Undicided
    March 2nd, 2009 at 2:54 am

    Aye… sure be fine poetry by captain BoJack… words never bin spoken so pretty in all my years wanderin…. A true man and a fine Capitan..

  • Karen Gross
    March 2nd, 2009 at 4:10 am

    I’m glad the middle eastern writing was not your bi-ku. Here goes:

    can’t sleep
    much pain

    drives me
    insane

    maxed out
    pain meds

    got no
    ice cream

    Maybe
    should scream?

  • Betty Carew
    March 2nd, 2009 at 8:10 am

    I may never fully appreciate or understand this poetry Bo but I am trying lol. Great job. Sad part is I may never ride the Bojack Express again lol. Admission price is impossible for me lol

  • CutestPrincess
    March 3rd, 2009 at 11:18 am

    that’s cool… i cant understand what’s written in your image, lolz! is that arabic, right? let me try bi-ku…

    oh, life
    how wonderful!

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