Tips on rhythm, meter, and more.
Modern poetry is at its best, I think, when it is artistic anarchy, when it follows no rules. Some poetry, however, rhymes, and has a measured rhythm count of beats called meter. Each line of verse is counted during and after writing. For example, Shakespeare, the old master, wrote in what’s called Iambic Pentameter. Iambic means that in the line, words are paired, and every short, weak, or soft syllable is followed by a long, strong, and hard syllable:
one, TWO, three, FOUR, five, SIX, seven, EIGHT, nine, TEN
Five such pairs is called a penta (Greek for “five”). I write the weak syllables in lower case and the strong syllables in UPPER CASE to remind me which is which. I also move my finger or tap my foot to the beat of the line.
Therefore we could start a verse with a pure and heartfelt emotion, Love:
i LOVE you
This statement consists of one and a half beat pairs, iambs. “i LOVE” makes one and “you” starts another. Now, we need to match “you” with a rhythmic partner. Though rhythm pairs can split words, any one syllable word will work well. Like “more”.
iLOVE youMORE
and we can just let it flow from there
iLOVE youMORE thanWORDS canSAY ,myDEAR. . . .
Then continue, using images from your imagination, or personal feelings you need to share, or your Valentine’s favorite color, etc., keeping the rhythm by counting the beat, word strength, and rhyming the terminal syllable(the last sound). Rhythm and rhyme can vary as much as you want, but the poem flows better when at least every other line is a match for sound(rhyme) and time(rhythm) Therefore, we could have:
I love you more than words can say, my dear
beCAUSE you MAKE me FEEL like I’M a KING
i LOOK inTO your EYES, my DEAR, and PEER
inTO the SWEETer FUture THAT you BRING.
I hope this can be of some small help for any modern poets who’d like to try classical verse.
Good Luck and have a Happy Valentines!
Tags: composition, gift, love, passion, poetry, Relationships, valentines, Writing
February 1st, 2009 at 11:33 am
Practice makes Perfect. Write a poem, then let it rest and settle down for a few hours. Come back to it later and revise until it feels complete.
February 1st, 2009 at 12:37 pm
That was excellent. Useful to me as well since I’m guilty of not paying attention to the syllables in my poetry, but doing so helps the flow of the poem.
February 2nd, 2009 at 1:42 am
this applies to me I make so many silly mistakes I always have to recheck thank you.