Three steps to a successful paper in school. Most of the time the things in here apply to Language Arts, English, etc.
1. Use Big words and confusing words (use an extensive vocabulary). Big words will help the teacher know that you have a very “Big” brain and an extensive vocabulary.
2. Make things flow. A sentence that leads to something else has to state how something led to something else.
3. Appeal to the reader’s senses. This creates an effect on the reader where he/she/it gets the effect that they’re in the situation that you’re writing/typing/ about.
This is what a sentence is like.
The boy walked into a forest and then shot a wolf.
This is what a sentence is like with these 3 steps.
The young man stumbled into a dense forest after he lost the trail. He saw a shadow in the forest, and it inched towards him. He quickly realized it was a wolf, and without hesitation, he pulled out his father’s rifle and shot it.
February 22nd, 2009 at 11:04 am
Teachers love those big words!!!