Posted on August 15th, 2007 in
How To by
Bill Yarrow
Have you wanted to write, but can never seem to get it quite right? Perhaps a few pointers may assist.
- The most important thing is to create character. Create a living, three-dimensional character, inhabited by real feelings and thoughts, and motivated by real-life desires and fears.
- Set your work in the real world.
- Create real people who have real feelings and who exist in real situations.
- Human motivation is basically simple. Universal, elemental desires operate within all of us.
- The seven deadly sins are pride, covetousness, lust, anger, gluttony, envy, and sloth
- A character is the particularization of a type
- Character drives action-not the other way around
- Real people think real thoughts. Have your characters think. The most significant action is always in the mind.
- The wise are not continuously wise. The foolish are not continuously foolish.
- Find the “telling” detail.
- Find the “telling” remark.
- Find the “telling” action.
- Avoid “drama.” Most life is not “dramatic” in the Hollywood sense.
- Don’t create superheroes; they don’t exist.
- Don’t create monsters; they don’t exist.
- No real person is ever one way all the time. Everyone’s a mixed bag.
- Explore the ordinary, but shun the mundane.
- Life is not a story, but life does provide stories. Be alert!
- We are surrounded by the material for art. Pay attention!
- Don’t be boring. To avoid being boring, know what it is to be truly interesting.
- Language is made memorable through attention to letters and sounds-through consonance, assonance, alliteration, and rhyme. Make your characters’ language memorable and your characters will be memorable.
- Ideas are made memorable through associations-examples, analogies, similes, and metaphors. Make memorable your characters’ ideas and your characters will be memorable.
- Pay specific attention to language in general.
- Pay attention to your own language in specific.
- Look at your writing globally and locally at the same time.
- Readers will follow what’s easy to follow. Parallelism (of words and phrases, of character and situation) makes things easy to follow. Strive to be parallel.
- Know where you’re going. Put up signs along the way.
- Repetition creates meaning. Variation creates life.
- Too few details erase; too many details obscure.
- Too much to look at is as great a fault as too little to see.
- Try not to be predictable. Do not, however, in the effort to avoid predictability, be absurd.
- The unexpected is never impossible.
- Don’t pick scabs. That is, don’t try to write about anything that hasn’t fully healed within you.
- If you want to pay someone back for something, don’t do it in your writing. If you try to use your writing for revenge, you will falsify your art.
- Do not use your art for praise or promotion. Art is not a vehicle for the dissemination of reward, particularly trophies of the self.
- Avoid clichés–clichés of speech, clichés of character, and clichés of situation.
- If you must use a cliché, freshen it.
- Tie abstractions to the earth with specific instances, vivid examples, and concrete details.
- Details, specifics, and examples unrelieved by ideas form a bog of badness.
- In order to write well, think clearly and write simply.
- Practice thinking in images.
- Edit your own work. Editing is cutting and polishing a rough, dusty diamond until it shines. This works on precious stones, not lumps of coal. Know what you have in front of you.
- Learn from others. Reading is a form of experience. So is observation
- The lesson of Shakespeare and Dickens is that even minor characters are whole human beings.
- We learn to speak by hearing speech and imitating it. We learn to write the same way-by reading writing and imitating it.
- When we see what has been done, we can see what can been done.
- If you don’t have a clear sense of badness, how will you know how to avoid it?
- It’s as easy to have good taste as it is to have bad taste. Hang around the discriminating and you’ll acquire better taste.
- The process of revision is a constant asking “What if?” What if I change this word, this line, this idea, this event, this point of view?
- An editor asks optometrist’s questions. “How is this? Better? Worse? How about this?”
- It’s not enough to ask yourself if you were specific. Ask yourself, “ Can I be more specific here?” Then ask yourself, “ Should I be more specific here?”
- There is no art without selectivity
- Taking out is more important than putting in
- An unusual word is unusual only once
- Too much of a good thing is a bad thing
- Too much of any one thing makes you sick.
- Care about your work. If you don’t care about it, why should anyone else care about it? If you don’t take it seriously, why should anyone else take it seriously?
- Think about why you are writing. Ask yourself what you really want to do in your writing.
- Don’t write garbage.
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