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Radhamani Sarma’s Poetry Analysis:promises Like Pie-crust,by Christina Rossetti

This study attempts to show that promises made should be kept,if not,
better not make promises at all. The poet uses the pie-crust imagery to
exemplify her point of view in splendid poetic terms.

Poetry analysis: Promises Like Pie-Crust, by

Christina Rossetti

by Radhamani Sarma

Promises like pie-crust by Christina Rossetti (1830-1894).

Christina Rossetti, the eminent Victorian woman poet was born in Dec, 5, 1830 
in London in England. This particular poem promises like pie-crust’ was 
written in the year 1861.The poetess in peculiar way makes reference to the 
common topic of Promises and sincerely wishes or pleads her friend not to 
make any promise and she too will maintain the status quo. It is a very delicate issue of making a promise and breaking it. Most of us in our day today life will make promises but most of us due to unwarranted situation will not abide by it, causing embarrassment and dilemma for both the sides. Sometimes the situation will expect of us that we will not be able to keep up a promise. As long as it is not inimical we can violate a promise if situation demands. 


Promises like pie-crust will not last long. 
But the poetess goes a step further and says let their friendship be not beguiled 
and spoilt by promises.

 

” Promise me no promises, 
So will I not promise you, 
Keep we both our liberties, 
Never false, never be true. 

In a very, private conversational tone, she asserts that they (the friends) can keep up liberties, their relationship can be maintained in true honesty, only when believe  in not making any promise. According to Rossetti, promise will stifle freedom and the interpersonal relationship would be at stake.

The poem takes a more grave tone, when she addresses her friend and days that both of them mutually are unaware of their past. Their freedom will not be spoilt, they are free to come and go as long as no promises..

In a very polished and scrumptious manner she relates, there may have been some  untold intricacies, some secrets, some unrevealed factors, which are so delicate, The poetess further goes on to say the unpredictability of future, the uncertainty of  Life, and the glimmer is taken away from the glass. In a beautiful poetic imagery  Observes,

 

“Who shall show us if it was 
Thus indeed, in time of old? 
Fades the image from the glass, 
And the fortune is not told.”

 

The poem comprises three stanzas each having eight lines with alternating rhymes, 
and the poet in a free conversational tone believes, that, promises made will make  one lose liberty in life. If she made promises she would lose the chain again. In the last poetic lines the poet is categorical and makes that let there be only true friendship. 


“let us be the friends we were, 
nothing more, but noting less: 


Anything should be economical and if exceeding the limit, will only end up in fiasco. 


Not making promises is the boundary. 
“many thrive on fugal fare, 
Who would perish of excess.” 
THE title like pie-crust is indeed good and apt.

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