Dialogue: Writing The Sassy, Sexy Very Short Story
Don’t make your characters sexual athletes. Make them talk and act like real people. Now that’s hot.
Cover of Husbands and Wives
We’ve all had sexy, hot conversations. Many of us have laughed at the profanity laced language of adult actors and actresses.
When I write an erotic flash fiction story, I want the reader to believe that the action and the language are pretty close to what happens in real life. This kind of dialogue is a careful balancing act. Go too far in one direction and the reader thinks, this writer is making this all up. Go too far in the opposite direction and the reader thinks, has this writer ever had sex?
You want the reader to think, that’s so true.
I have a little trick that I use in a lot of my sexy stories to make the dialogue sound true. I have my characters involved in a sex act while they talk about something else. Now not always; but that kind of behavior smacks of reality.
What I am really saying is that when you write dialogue for your sassy, sexy story put some thought into the dialogue you write for your husbands and wives or boyfriends and girlfriends or for your lovers. The best dialogue is still about projecting the personality of the person talking.
Just remember that.
And of course, the dialogue of two people talking not only reveals character but it also reveals the nature of their relationship even as they work toward sexual gratification.
Here are two stories that illustrate my point: Nude Coversation and Orgasm.
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June 2nd, 2011 at 2:51 pm
How you write is just as important as what you write, whether it’s a poem, an article or a steamy love story! If you want people to be interested you have to make it not good, but great!
June 2nd, 2011 at 2:59 pm
nice share…
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June 2nd, 2011 at 3:00 pm
cool idea
June 2nd, 2011 at 4:24 pm
Hogan I agree with Melanie– but when I write I try not to make it real– I live enough real and so do you– I over compensate for sensationalism– something like that LOL nevertheless thumbs up my friend
June 2nd, 2011 at 5:41 pm
Real is always best!
June 2nd, 2011 at 7:51 pm
I agree with u, great dialogues can bring life to the characters and can change the whole tempo of the story.
June 2nd, 2011 at 8:53 pm
cooool.
June 2nd, 2011 at 9:31 pm
Dialogue can make or break a story and it is one of the hardest thing to write. Writing dialogue for a sexy story, I have found is ever harder.
June 2nd, 2011 at 11:28 pm
The goal is to project the personality of the speaker, but doing it well comes with practice. Good tips as always.
June 3rd, 2011 at 5:55 am
Good points as always. However talk about different subjects when having sex? do you mean like shopping? or decorating whilst copulating? umm don’t think so. I base my sex talk for short stories on conversations I have had whilst having sex or before or after sometimes people don’t speak at all whilst having sex their too busy!!!!! Good tips here. LB
June 4th, 2011 at 12:11 pm
Yes, I agree but there are so many variations to the topic that is where the immagination comes in. Thanks