Crimson Skies
Looking out the window today I saw the skies have a magical red tint which left everyone around me querying "Whats’ with that Red tint today"… It was magical, as if the Creator cried tears of blood which were caught in the clouds lending a magical hue… Its nature at its best…
Crimson Skies, pouring rain,
Crying Creator, Lovelorn strain.
Beautiful lips, that do part,
Smashing bows, loving heart.
Cloudy shawl, tear on brow,
Fertile ground, seed to sow.
Beauty of nature, Crimson sky,
You are reason, rivers flow by.
Reddish lips, touching my heart,
Planting a seed, playing a part.
Seeds of Love, Seeds forgive,
Raining happiness, No deceive.
Crimson skies, Crimson tide,
Anthem of beauty, Nothing to hide.
Earth, my love, for you I rain,
Constant orbit, can’t complain.
For I miss you, but look at you,
Sing my anthems, cry so true.
Tears of blood, In clouds hide,
Of the passion, Once denied.
Crimson Clouds, My feelings hide,
Upon Hurt, the grey tide.
For I am rain, The Creators’ tear,
I cry for all, My heart, my Fear.
For my love, My Earth my all,
I tearfully watch, destruction fall.
She’e ebbing away, through mortal cries,
Emboldening flaming, enhancing ties.
She is responding, to my love now,
With fiery explosions, the faint glow.
Shallow Earthquakes, raging tears,
She is hurting, hiding fears.
Crimson Skies, I hear your cry,
My love for you, I can’t deny.
I am Blue, with a magical hue,
My Dear Creator, I love you too.
By Anisha Achankunju (C) 4th June 2011
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June 4th, 2011 at 6:49 am
nice one! And nice picture!
June 4th, 2011 at 6:53 am
Powerful emotions and a great interpretation on feelings from the colour of the sky.
June 4th, 2011 at 9:09 am
A reddish sky at dusk usually means rain the next day.
June 4th, 2011 at 9:37 am
My dear creator I love you too(/b>
June 4th, 2011 at 9:47 am
Nice poem. Thank you Aiyanna.
June 4th, 2011 at 11:21 am
The pictures were great, as were the words. So a solid effort all together.
June 5th, 2011 at 4:02 pm
what great poetry with with great pictures
June 7th, 2011 at 10:18 am
Awesome corresponding pictures