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Romeo and Juliet

The story of Romeo and Juliet is written in 16 century by William Shakespeare…

Who is to blame for the deaths of Romeo and Juliet?

The story of Romeo and Juliet is written in 16 century by William Shakespeare. The story is about two powerful families’ montage and Capulet which they have been fighting for long time from generation to generation. The fights were tough between those two families. One day one of the families had party and invites everyone around street but not the other family. Suddenly some of the guys from other family sneak and inter the other family’s party. At the party one person fell in love with other person from other family which is their most hated family. Suddenly they agreed to marry each other even though they were enemy. They had their marriage secretly and didn’t tell their parents. The love was strong and no one could stop them from loving each other. They even risky their life just to be together but suddenly one day they both died and those two families became together. There is must be reasons for this which caused the death of two lovers. The reasons are the reasons below.

Who caused the death of the two lovers?

NURSE

I think that nurse is to blame because she put the ladder form the ground to Juliet’s window. She said “hie you to church, I must another way to fetch a ladder, by the which you love”

This shows that she helped and let Juliet to get to meet with Romeo. This is bad thing because Romeo may persuade Juliet to go out with him and could cause huge trouble.

Again I think that nurse is to blame because she should be responsible for the wedding and not to let the wading go head.

She said to Juliet “then hie you hence to Friar Lawrence’ cell, there stay a husband to make you a wife” she let them get married when she knew that Juliet was engaged with Paris. Also that was not good idea and this part is where the death started to build up.

Another wrong thing that she did was to keep sending news from Juliet to Romeo and Romeo to Juliet.

She said to Juliet “your love says, like an honest gentleman”

That was big mistake that she did and was not good idea because she makes Juliet feel even more in love with Romeo and that would be hard for them to break-up. Also Juliet believed nurse because she knows that nurse won’t lie because she loves her.

FRIAR LAWRANCE

Friar Lawrance did the most and big mistakes in that play and I think that he is the most to blame because he gave the drug to Juliet and say to her “take thou this vial, being then in bed, And this distilling liquor drink thou off,” that shows he gave drags to Juliet and he tell her to drink is bed time to pretend that she died.

Also another mistake that he did was to arrange marriage between Romeo and Juliet.

He said to Juliet “come, come with me and we will make short work, for by your leaves, you shall not be alone till holly church incorporate two in one”

He arranged marriage; he thought that when those two are marry to each other the fight would stop. At the same time when they get married she was engage with Paris and nurse knew that. That was bad because she was suppost to marry Paris instead of Romeo.

Another mistake that he did was that he ran away from the tomb instead of helping Juliet and Juliet killed her self.

He said to Juliet that “come, I’ll dispose of thee Among a sisterhood of holy runs…come go, good Juliet, I dare no longer stay”

He didn’t help Juliet then when Romeo went inside the tomb he found that Juliet was asleep but he didn’t thought that she was asleep he thought that she was dead because friar lawrance wasn’t there to tell Romeo that she was alive. Romeo drank poison after knowing that Juliet died. Just after he drank it, Juliet wakes up and find out that Romeo drank poison then Juliet killed her self.

MY CONCLUTION

I think that friar lawrance was the most to blame. He as done most big mistakes and all of his plans went wrong. He never had any other plans that may would back him up encase the others went wrong. The letter that he wrote confused Rome and thought that Juliet died.

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4 Responses to “Romeo and Juliet”
  • shaku
    June 13th, 2007 at 8:12 pm

    waw this nice I like it the way you wrote good job man
    i wish i could be like in time of writing essay !!!!

  • Dickies
    May 27th, 2009 at 5:13 pm

    Good stuff, I “Stumbled” you. My DIGG account got messed up but I like Stumbling better anyway.

  • Emily
    May 28th, 2009 at 1:43 am

    this is very silly.
    so the parents had no role in their death?
    i think youll find that friar lawrence was only helping because he was sick of the feud between the two familys.
    if you look into it i think youll find it was the parents fault.
    none of this would of happend if lady capulet didnt force juliet into marrying paris. and if their familys wernt enemys.
    think about it

  • zach de boer
    November 18th, 2009 at 9:51 pm

    Not to be annoying or anything but the next time you write something read through the whole book. if you did you would know that romeo never got the letter and was never confused about it

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